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So her hair is finally exposed. This is not her final look, sorry, you have to wait a little longer before seeing her new hair style.

Well enjoy. I'm going to try to get another page done before the day is out.

The Characters and story of Inside OuT is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.
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:icondarthshade245:
darthshade245 Featured By Owner Jul 10, 2014  Hobbyist Photographer
irony is coffee was the correct answer
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djcard Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2012
NOT THE SUDOKU!!! lol
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FeyPandora Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist
Cant... stop... reading. :heart:
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner May 20, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you are enjoying it.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
^^; well the hair is not that missed-up
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is really uneven and needs to be fixed that is for sure.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD I've seem hair-style that more "uneven" in the name of "fashion"
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, but for Hitomi it isn't what she was hoping for.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 11, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:shrug:
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:iconmonicalynnevallejo:
monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
Um....she likes it? lol I cannot wait to see what she will look like^^
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Give me til next week. Her new look appears in the next chapter, only 6 more pages in this chapter left to go. Speaking of which I need to get more done.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
CANT WAIT!!!!!!!!! AwsomenessXD
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.

Kat
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:iconmonicalynnevallejo:
monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009
You are very welocme^^
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
I figured her hair was gonna look like that.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is not her final look mind you.

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
Oh I had a feeling it wasn't but this is her current look that we'll be seeing.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*nods* Interesting how many people are liking the two quick hair designs for her so far... I just hope they enjoy the final look because it is the one I spent the most time on.

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
I'm sure we the fans will. Right now I'm more interested in the rest of the story.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is good to kn ow you are interested in the story, since that is more important.

Jaa ne

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Yes, agreed.
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yokomolotov Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2009  Professional Artist
awww i think her hair is cute!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, it is not the final new look mind you.

Kat
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shanejayell Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Heh! So she does Sudoku too? ^_~ Smart lady. I barely manage crossword puzzles.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Kim plays Sudoku all the time. She runs through books of the stuff like there is no tomorrow. I just got her a new one last week and she has already finished the first 60 or so puzzles of easy and more then likely will be finished with all 500 in a couple of months. I don't know how she does it.

Kat
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alexislame Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
Ha ha sudoku! Yay Im glad to see the hair!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well remember it is not her official hair style as of yet.

Kat
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Birdee-Blake Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Oh no not the sudoku!! I wonder how she wouldn't have noticed the hair before, even with the hat on... But, well, it makes sense for the story, so oh well.

I kind of like the sister character. The whole "I have coffee and I always look sleepy O:" thing is cool to me. Also her hair is awesome.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You'll understand why she reacted that way in a moment, when I finish the next page.

I'm glad you like her. I spent a lot of time trying to figure her character out. Her hair was a struggle so I'm glad people are liking it.

Well jaa ne

Kat
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azarath Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Doing great thus far! :popcorn:

As far as typos/etc., I'd make Hitomi's I'd put a comma after "Shoot" so it doesn't read so awkwardly. (And if you ever need a proofreader, that's one of the only things in this world I'm any good at!) My other critque would be some action lines on Hitomi in the last panel or something to show she's moving.

I'm enjoying the comic, keep it coming! =D
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm glad people are liking it because it really does feel good to get back to manga again. I can't believe I finished sketching 10 pages in a sitting, just planning sketches mostly, but more then I thought I could do. I seem to be bitten by the manga bug and it feels great. LOL

Your right on both accounts. I think I was rushing and forgot the extra speed lines on Hitomi and I'll add in a comma and what have you tomorrow, not supposed to be working on weekends, not even answering messages, but I wanted to answer yours.

Having a proofreader would be great. English is actually my worst subject and I need all the help I can get. Just send any errors you see to me and I'll fix them right away. I'm very grateful for all the help. Thank you.

I'll have more up tomorrow. I was nearly finished another page when life took over and so the rest has to wait until Monday.

Well thanks again for reading and the help.

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
It's cool that her hair is finally exposed... I can't wait to see her official haircut later! :heart: So far, Hitomi is my fav character... her big sis is really awesome, too! :) You're doing a great job on this manga. :thumbsup:
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it and liking Hitomi and Melody. I hope you enjoy the rest of the characters as they appear in later chapters.

Jaa ne

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
No prob. :)
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krystalraven Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009
I just read pages 5-20. I did that purposely because I like being able to read/view several at a time so I don't forget or lose the storyline. However I did notice one error on this: at the top in Hitomi's first block on the bubble to the right you forgot a word. The bubble should read "it's actually a good THING she's not here" or "it's actually good she's not here". You need to either take out the 'a' or add 'thing'. Other than that it looks great and I can't wait for more! ^_^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'll fix that right away.

I'm glad you are enjoying the story so far. I should have more up in a bit.

Kat
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krystalraven Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
No problem! And I'll keep reading ^_^
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