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No they are not in a romantic relationship of any time so don't think it. I actually have no idea what compelled me to draw Melody doing that to her sister, but when I thought of her trying to comfort Hitomi that is the sketch that came out of me. They are just sisters so don't get the wrong idea.

Hopefully this explains a bit more. I hope to have more up soon enough. Enjoy.

The Characters and story of Inside OuT is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.
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Saber-RougeX Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
So touching, her pride is still there. She doesn't want to give up (with Ayumi), right? very nice chapter.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner May 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it. Nope, she still is attached to Ayumi and will have a hard time giving her up.

Thank.

Kat
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AJAngelique Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
her hair is cute short like that
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, a lot of people seem to think that.

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwww.... Melody is just making sure Hitomi understands that she's there for her, in a big-sisterly way. :nod: At first I thought she was tilting Hitomi's face up in a romantic way, but people do that sometimes to make sure they are making eye contact and getting through to them. I agree with what someone else said, though... it might have been better if Melody put her hand on top of Hitomi's head... it would have been more sibling-like. :nod: I do like what you've done, though, don't get me wrong. :) You do whatever feels right in your mind... it's a beautiful manga so far. :heart:

I love their relationship... it makes me wish that I had a big sis to turn to when I was growing up. :(
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The reason I don't have her patting Hitomi's head is because that is not in her personality. Melody is not a head patter, she is a little more touchy feelie. It is part of her personality, but yeah you are right she is trying to make sure Hitomi does not turn away. I don't know if you have noticed this but Hitomi tends to turn her head away when she is talking or embarrassed.

I'm glad you are enjoying it. I wish I had a big sister like her as well, but sadly I was the big sister in my family and lost my sister when I was kicked out so never got to be a big sister to her much. *sighs*

Well jaa ne

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Ohhhh, I see. :) I'll have to remember that... lol Melody just isn't the head patting type. :XD: Also, yeah, I did kinda notice that Hitomi tends to look down or away whenever she is talking or embarrassed... it's kinda cute.

Sorry things didn't go so well with your family. :( It's gotta be hard being the big sister... it sucks that you weren't really able to be a big sis. I've never been much of a family person, but it does suck for me being an only child. It's not as nice being an only child as people often think... I actually get very lonely at times.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I consider a lot of things when I think about a character, would they do this or would they do that? That kind of thing. I try to keep it all in mind when drawing them and think of what they would do in any given situation to give them more personality.

She is cute that way. It is one of the things I love about her. I never get tried of drawing her blush. LOL

I know how the loneliness can feel consider I have been on my own for a long long time. I feel I really messed up with my little sister because I was never around and found out later that she got pregnant when she was only 15 and is not on drugs. Makes me wonder if I could have made a difference or not. *shrugs* Guess I can't wollow in the past.

Well back to work with me.

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah, I'm the same way with my own characters... I haven't made a manga yet, but I originally wanted to make one. I just don't have the patience to make a manga. ^^; However, my characters do have a lot of personality. :)

I was actually the same way with my ex-gf that Hitomi is with Ayumi... I was all like "I only love Kristen! She's the only girl I'll ever love!" lol I guess that's why I've never really given other girls a chance... I'm always comparing them to my ex. But Kristen was perfect for me.

Sorry that happened to your little sister... don't blame yourself, though. Kids are curious when it comes to sex... she might have still done it at age 15 and gotten pregnant even if you had been there to help guide her... but who knows. You're right, though, you can't wallow in the past. :( We can learn from the past, though.

Yes, back to work with you! =P lol There is manga to be done. ;) :love:
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Yeah, manga needs a lot of patience and time. I mean it took me only a month to write out 14 chapters while it has taken 3 months to finish 2 chapters of the manga. But it is worth while in the end and a lot of fun, at least I feel it is.

Hitomi learns soon enough that there are other girls in the world. She just needs time. But yet she stays pretty hung up on Ayumi for most of the story and probably won't ever get over her.

Hard not to blame myself, but I try not too let it get me down so much.

Only 2 more pages in this chapter left and last night I ended coming up with several new chapters so this story keeps getting longer and longer the more I work on it. One day I'll get to the ending.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
YAY!!! More goodness!
Its hard to live in somebody else's image.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*nods* That is it. That it is.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Sad, but true- -
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yokomolotov Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Professional Artist
aww man i love your old school style...
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, Glad you are enjoying my style.

Kat
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Indigo-Ashes Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
The last panel is cute, I like her hair, even if it's still messed up from a botched trimming job.

Grateful should be greatful.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks for the compliment. I spent a lot more time on that panel then usual. I'm glad you liked it.

Strange according to my dictionary and an online dictionary it is spelled correctly. Maybe it is different where you are. *shrugs*

Thanks for telling me. I appreciate it.

Kat
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Indigo-Ashes Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
Ah! Well that's not surprising then.

Australian spelling of things, haha.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahhh. Yeah Canada spells things even different from others as well. It is fun trying to fine the right spelling so I have to keep Canadian Dictionaries around just to keep things consistent at the very least.

There are way to many spellings for things now a days it gets so confusing. LOL

Kat
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shanejayell Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
*claps*

Nicely done! :)
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it.

Kat
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alexislame Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
yay, a moment of self-realization! =D
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*grins* I wanted this to be more then just cutting her hair because of a girl.

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
Oh that is so sweet!!! XDDDD
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it.

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2009
You're welcome. ^^
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smokey51 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
You probably should have drawn it so that melody puts her hand on top of the sister's head.

Just my opinion..
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She is not the type to pat on the head. You'll understand more as the story progresses.

Kat
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OmegaBlue69 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
I see how people could think that, but if they've been following the story I don't think most will think that.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I wrote that for those who are just walking into the story and have not read the rest of the tale first. I've grown tired of the amount of anime art online that depicts mother/daughter or Sisters just comforting each other and people thinking it is something more so I added that little note.

Kat
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OmegaBlue69 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
I'm just glad I haven't had to do a disclaimer for my story's family.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I've had to add in all sorts of disclaimers because you never know what people will think. I've got some rather odd fan art before and it really makes me leery of what people will do if I don't explain things clearly.

Well back to work with me. More pages to get done.

Kat
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OmegaBlue69 Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009
Good luck on your work.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 30, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, hopefully it will go smoothly this week.

Kat
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