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WOW so many people guessed and not one figured it out. Even those who have read the story this is based on. Guess I didn't make it as obvious as I thought it was. Good to know.

Well there is only one more page before the end of this chapter. I'll finish that chapter tomorrow.

I hope you all enjoy this page. Now off to sleep with me.

The Characters and story of Inside OuT is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.
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:iconsmithca1988:
smithca1988 Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2011
love Hitomis recation to the uniform. :)

Keep On Rocking In The Free World-Neil Young.
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WolfOfTheWinterMoon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
eh?? this is getting more interesting by the minute ^^ must read on o.0
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you are finding it interesting. Sorry if I don't reply to the last few messages, never sure what to say to them at times. More so when I'll just end up repeating myself.

Kat
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:iconnekorin-gatacat:
Nekorin-Gatacat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
That caught me by surprise. She wanted to give that to her since she was 6?
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 13, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She wanted her sister to follow in her foot steps.

Kat
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:iconshadow-gaijin:
Shadow-Gaijin Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
LOLZZZ Teaaasse!! XD
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not sure how that is a tease...

Kat
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Saber-RougeX Featured By Owner May 29, 2009
LOL boy's uniform! I never thought of that before but wow! great chapter! I love it!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner May 29, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad it was unexpected, part of me thought people would figure it out, but I'm glad it was a surprise.

Kat
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kaira-deviant Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009   Writer
dude, i totally saw that coming the moment she cut her hair!!!
maybe i've read too much hana-kimi....hahah! nice twist!
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. I was thinking of a lot of those manga that have girls dressing in boy's uniforms while writing this and really wanted to have a good reason behind the uniform instead of just jumping into things. It gives a lot more depth to the story and the characters.

Kat
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kaira-deviant Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009   Writer
yeah. i think you began the story at a good time, instead of just jumping into her heartbreak. it would be nice to have a flashback beyond just her describing her first time meeting ayumi, but i like how you described her crying after her parents died.
it was a very deep feeling, that she was crying out of guilt.
*applause*
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. It took a lot to come up with where to begin and how to explain everything nicely, without boring the hell out of people. I'll probably have some flashbacks later in the story, but for the most part they are not needed. I'm really trying to get to the high school moments right now and there is already so much that the flashbacks might bog things down at the moment. I'll leave them for later chapters.

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed my little story. I should have more up soon enough.

Kat
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kaira-deviant Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009   Writer
definitely. i agree with you completely when you say too may flashbacks might "bog things down" true. for now, i think you have enough to give the readers an idea of her past while leaving some mystery. i guess i'm just curious to know more about her!
^.^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll tell more of Ayumi's past later. Keeping a bit of mystery keeps the readers coming back for more I've found. *grins*

Kat
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kaira-deviant Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009   Writer
well...i'm a perfect example of that, aren't i?
but yes, i understand completely. mystery keeps us interested
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 9, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
*nods* that they do. That is how I kept people interested in a 3 book series for the past 6 years. Giving little bits here and there to keep them coming back for more.

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
How'd I see this coming? Still a nice plot twist. Now I have predictions about the future.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Then you would be the only one to guess that.

I wonder if your predictions will be correct or not?

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
Really? I mean I kinda figured she was gonna do the whole boys uniform thing though I'm pretty sure my reasoning behind it was wrong.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Oh, I thought you were saying that you figured out what was inside of the box. No one seemed to have known the answer to that.

But yeah, I planed this from the beginning. Originally she was supposed to show up at school in that uniform at the beginning of the story, but I decided to add in more story. I'm just glad people are enjoying the story so far.

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
Yeah I guess we just had a misunderstanding. I had no idea what was inside the box.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well it is good that no one knew what was inside the box. Make it a bit more of a surprise then.

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Apr 5, 2009
Yes very true.
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:iconkrystalraven:
krystalraven Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
Ha! I didn't guess that one, but that's cool! Perhaps boyishness 'runs in the family' as they say. Though something tells me their mother wasn't anything near boyish...
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Boyish is not exactly the reason behind Melody having the school uniform. I'll explain that in the next page, which I should be working on right now. No, her mother was nowhere near boyish at all that is for sure.

Well back to work with me.

Kat
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krystalraven Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
Ooo can't wait to see the next page hehe
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Just eating lunch now. All I have is to finish toning and the next page will be done so expect to see it in a couple more hours.

Kat
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:iconkrystalraven:
krystalraven Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009
Ha, I get this message after *I* get back from lunch along with the next page...sweet ^_^
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Well then it was perfect timing for you. *grins*

Kat
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krystalraven Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2009
exactly hehe
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yokomolotov Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Professional Artist
omg i cant wait to see her wear it!!!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You'll see her soon enough. Her new looks will be shown in the next chapter for sure.

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
OMG... lol I was thinking it might have been something like this! :XD: A boy's school uniform.... I can't wait to see her wearing it and see what happens next!! :love: This is awesome!! It's also cool to know that it used to belong to her sis... I guess Melody used to be boyish, too! :D This manga just keeps getting better and better! If you were to ever get it published, I'd definitely buy it!
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it.

Originally the story just started with her showing up at school in her boy's uniform and new hair cut and she explains things in a single page, but I extended things to allow the readers to understand stand more about how she ended up in that situation. I'm been working my way to this point for a while now and can't wait to start drawing her in that uniform. It is the reasons some of my colour images have to wait for a bit. Soon very soon you'll see the new Hitomi.

Kat
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vamp-princess-Lumina Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
I'm so glad you took the time to explain things, instead of just jumping into her wearing the boy's uniform and the new hair cut. Taking time to explain gives the story and characters more depth and makes it more enjoyable, I think. :) I really look forward to chapter 3. Also, I think it is a really good idea to make the first page of each chapter in color, it adds a nice touch! :nod:
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is good to know this is what people want because originally I was trying to make things move quickly, but now I have been adding in all sorts of details that I originally cut out. I'm taking on the manga like one of my novels. Only cutting things that do not progress the story in some way or another. It is kind of insane because now I have 8 new chapters from the original story.

I'm eager to get started on the next page, but need a short break, hence taking tomorrow and the weekend off. It is going to be interesting trying to come up with colour pages for each chapter, but I'll see what I can do.

More notes to put together.

Kat
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shanejayell Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
LOL

Okay, I shoulda guessed that. :) Now I REALLY wanna see what happens next!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
LOL, yeah, I thought you would have guessed that one. I guess I did not make it very obvious though which is good.

I'll have more today and then start the next chapter on monday.

Kat
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IkitsumiDaminito Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow...that was unexpected! o.o I think that she'd be adorable in it though. 8D
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That she does. I've been waiting to post sketches of her in that uniform for a while now, but didn't want to give away what happens. Trying to keep it a secret until I revealed this part was not hard, but well worth it.

Kat
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IkitsumiDaminito Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist General Artist
Yep! The comic's going great so far, keep it up! The chapter 2 ending was nice too, I can't wait to see what happens next~ ^w^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
good to know so many people are looking forward to more.

Kat
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JessicaBlood Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
Hmm I wonder why her sister wanted to wear the boys uniform. Is her sister boyish too?

Also at the bottom the "your" should have an s at the end so she says "yup ad now it's all yours"
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is explained in the next page, which I'll have up later today.

Thanks. I'll fix that right away.

Kat
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Birdee-Blake Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Student Digital Artist
ALSO: What's with that line on Hitomi's face in the second panel?
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It is a shock line. I don't know why some mangaka drew them when someone is shocked, but I got into the habit of doing the same. *shrugs*

Kat
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Birdee-Blake Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009  Student Digital Artist
Eee, she's going to look so cute in it >:3. Hopefully the school'll actually let her wear the boys uniform... But I guess they would since it's part of the story, huh o.O;.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That she does.

Yep, I explain a lot about that uniform in the next page which I'll post later today.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2009
BOY's UNIFORM!?! I can see why they argued^^
Awsome!!
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