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Inside Out Page 13 by The-Yuri-Canon Inside Out Page 13 by The-Yuri-Canon
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I'm sorry for the wordiness of this page. I wanted to explain a bit about Hitomi's living situation and just how much that day meant to her. I'm returning to the story at hand in the next page.

Sorry for my horrible drawing of the car. I've never been good at drawing a car and using stock for the car seemed wrong because it was a real accident so I just drew it the best I could. Kim was laughing and saying that I'm not a real boi because I can't draw cars. Vehicles were never my specialty, girls are. LOL

Anyways, I'll have more next week. I finally finished the last of my character profile sketchs and can't wait to introduce all these characters to you all. Starting with Hitomi's sister.

Well, enjoy.

The Characters and story of Inside OUt is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.

Kat
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:iconwolfofthewintermoon:
WolfOfTheWinterMoon Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2011  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Loving the plot so far, its a good original idea ^^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Aug 29, 2011  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I try my best to come up with original ideas. After 9 novels I'm afraid I'm going to run out of original ideas one of these days.

Kat
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Nekorin-Gatacat Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
You got me with panel 2.
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Shadow-Gaijin Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
"Confess my love to Ayu-chan" <3 <3 <3
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:sherlock: hmmm thats interesting
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you are enjoying it.

Kat
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AJAngelique Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
your...art...ROCKS!!!
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you are liking it and thanks for all the favs.

Kat
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AJAngelique Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
yw ^_^
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
You draw cars better than I do!!
Awsome page!!
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I just tried to make it look like a car. You should see what happens when I try to put people inside the car... ACK! That is a nightmare I never want to relive... none of my characters will ever be driving cars ever again. LOL

Thanks, glad you liked it and thanks for the fav.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
LOL I hear yah^^!! Its great to try and try agian^^
You are very welcome^^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I found this japanese book once for drawing people getting in and out of cars, that is all it was. I really wish I had the money to pick it up when I found it because it would have been of great help. There are so many strange useful books in Japan for art. I would be so broke if I lived out there.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2009
So would I ^^!
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shanejayell Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Aww. LOvely art, tho.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you liked it.

Kat
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zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
Oh that's so sweet. Except for the car crash and death part. By the way how did the car end up like that? I'm very curious.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Glad you liked it. *shrugs* I have no idea. I was looking through photos of care wrecks and found this one of a car upside down and an ambulance near by. There were no bodies around so I decided it would be good reference. So I'm sorry, but I have no answer for that question.

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
Oh I thought the ambulance was the other vehicle...
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Maybe I should have wrote Ambulance on the back, like they usually do...

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009
It's ok though that would have helped.
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'll fix that later then. Trying to get another page finished right now.

Kat
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:iconzonzalee:
zonzalee Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009
Yeah which was good. By the way good news! I came up with a name for my OC that I was telling you about! Her name is officially Alice Victoria Kaimera and she's cute as can be! ^_^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That's good. Good luck with that.

Kat
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alexislame Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
Yay this is awesome! Great story development! =D
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you are enjoying it.

Kat
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handj Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009   Writer
So was she able to confess? How did ayumi responded? Hehehehe

Will be waiting for next installment =)
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She confessed about 3 pages back, did you miss it?

Kat
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handj Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009   Writer
Perhaps It didn't register or I forgot? Hehehehe, sorry kat been thinking a lot lately and things I read sometimes flew afterwards. hehehehe. gomen ne

Warm compress with more heat helps sprained ankle. I was once in a hospital duty for 24 hours when an oxygen tank carrier hit my ankle and sprained it pretty bad, my ankle swelled and even darkened (from bruise) and I just soaked it in a warm water (well more on the hot one) and it works. Hehehehe. It helps soothe pain temporarily too. =)
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is alright.

Thanks, I'm going to take a hot bath a bit later. I'm nearly finished another page so what to get that done before soaking with some shoujo-ai manga. *grins*

Kat
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Student General Artist
crap...
accidently clicked the send button.
thanks though lol ^^;
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Student General Artist
no offense...the "car accident" things is a cliché in all love stories as with most "loosing parents at early ages" plot devices. A hardly unused one would be something like: war, killer, random gang, plane crash, etc...(all horrible but still hardly used.)




also do you have something that converts roman alphebets to kanji?
I need this turned to kanji for a grave marker: AmaKawari Sosuke
(a character I made up)
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Considering most anime/manga does not explain a thing about where the parents are I wanted to explain why she lived with her sister and not her parents. Considering Car accidents are one of the leading causes of death it is not really cliche as much as it is a normal occurrence.

And no I don't have one.

Kat
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Student General Artist
I see. but so many stoies use it taht it's gotten predictible when you have stuff involving orphans/ parentless kids who live with relatives.


oh. well thanks anyway lol^^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I don't think that is predictable. Can you tell me where this story is going? Do you know the outcome? No it is not predictable. It is just a way to explain away the parents instead of just not having them around. Btw: it is not common in anime/manga at all. As I said before most stories dealing with kids on their own just don't mention the parents or the kids moved out to live on their own during school. The predicable thing would have been to have the girl sent to all girls dorm to live. Take a look at most lesbian manga. They almost always take place in a dorm, no dead parents, nothing like that. So death of parents is actually uncommon in the manga universe.

Anyways, this has nothing to do with the story at hand.

Kat
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Student General Artist
I understand (and it's good too, by the way) but to me, there are a lot romantic stories with a tragic backstory though. And yup, I notice the dorm thing too. lol.
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JessicaBlood Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
That car's way better than any car I could draw XD

Also fourth word box on the left side of the second picture says "as I cried with guilty" I think you meant to write "as I cried with guilt"
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, it was just a quick sketch and I think since I had to crush part of it it made the sketch look better. LOL

Thanks, I'll fix that right now.

Kat
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JessicaBlood Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
You're welcome ^^ I understand how easy it is to make stupid mistakes. Haha I know whenever I type a paper for school I always make some stupid spelling mistake or leave out a word. After it's handed back I'm always like "how did I manage to not notice this?" o.o
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm an expert at typos and missing words. Dyslexia doesn't help much either. Makes it hard for me to notice when I've made a mistake or not so I have to hope for the kindness of strangers to help out. So thanks again.

Kat
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beastknight Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009
I found this page to be rather informative. I do think you managed your goal of telling us more about Hitomi in a way that brought the last chapter into more focus. Can't wait for the new characters to make their appearance.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, that means a lot to me. I had so much information I wanted to cram in to as little space as I could. Trying to figure out how to tell her story without it taking an entire chapter was not easy. I had to weed out a lot of unnecessary stuff. I think I manage to fit in all the important points and the rest will come up later in the story.

I can't wait either. It took me a lot longer to come up with the designs for them all. I mean there are about 7 characters to show up, 4 of which appear in the next chapter alone. It was fun drawing them all and I hope people enjoy them as well.

Well thanks for reading.

Kat
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