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Note: Because so many people complain about the usage of Japanese in manga I've translated Hitomi and Melody's dialogue so they now say simply Big sis, little sis or just sis. For those interested Hitomi usually says Nee-chan and Melody, Imoto-chan. For all intent and purpose Sis should do just fine.

On the art side I'm amazed, I managed to finish scanning in and set up the text for the next 10 pages as well as finish inking and scanning this page all in one day. This has been a rather productive day it would seem. Hopefully this is good news for the rest of the month. All I need to do now is ink and tone the last nine pages and colour the cover page of the beginning to chapter 3.

I hope people enjoy this part of the story. Originally I was going to cut it down, but I found this explains a lot about things later in the story so left it the way it is. I hope it is too everyone's liking.

Well nighter.

The Characters and story of Inside OUt is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.

Kat
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SweetHellish Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This might be a really dumb comment but upon seeing her big sister... That is one fine sister. : P
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought for sure I answered this one... maybe I dreamed I did... Anyways, a lot of people like Melody. More so after I posted her profile page
Inside OuT: Melody Profile by The-Yuri-Canon
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SweetHellish Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You did answer it, right? I'm sure you did but can't find your response
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DA had a hiccup I guess... *shrugs* Well enjoy the rest of Inside OuT. Time to try to get more pages done.
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Shadow-Gaijin Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
yyy pppl complain about usin jap dialogue ._.!! that wat makes a manga, a mang D:<
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
People generally like to hear themselves talk and think they know everything so complain about the silliest of things. I could make a book out of the list of strange complaints I've heard in the past while.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconohseriousplz: come-o0o0o0on spell-it-out
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She will.

Kat
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Deglorath Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
Melody looks like someone you'd want to open up to, must make her a good counselor. I personally don't have any problem with however people want to write out their stories, I've seen some that even jump back and forth pretty wildly; but I think it should be up to you, eh? Anyways, good page.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is what I was trying for with her looks and had to draw her several times before getting it right. She needed to look understanding and yet cool at the same time. I toyed with several looks for her and finally settled with this one.

I don't plan to really jump around. More like take on different perspectives every now and then so people know what is going on outside of Hitomi's life instead of being completely in the dark all the time. I figured out how to go about this for the next chapter and I think it really works well for this story and allows me to give more insight into Hitomi's friends as well as other things that are going on.

Well, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'll have more up soon enough. I can't wait to get to show off her new looks.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
She looks cute!
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks. Originally she was just supposed to walk in with the new hair cut, but this gives the two of them more time to talk before the bomb is dropped.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
You are very welcome^^ At least she has a supportive sister^^
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That she does.

Kat
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monicalynnevallejo Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2009
^^
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Student General Artist
hey! New character!!
alright XD
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
More characters will be appearing with each chapter from the next while now so expect a lot more.

Kat
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dd4rri3nd Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Student General Artist
I was talking about the one with the hat.
lol
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TasmanianTiger Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I love this comic so much.
I can't wait for updatessss~
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying it. I have 10 more pages that just need inking and toning before posting so expect to see a lot in the next little while. I'll be working on it every day besides tomorrow, Kim's b-day, and weekends.

Well speaking of which I'm off to work now.

Kat
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TasmanianTiger Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Professional Digital Artist
I can't wait! :D
Also, happy birthday to Kim~
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
You can tell her on her page, I linked to it on my journal.

I'm glad you are enjoying it, hope you liked the new pages.

Kat
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Tamasha Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ahh, new character >D (By which I mean that neechan's been mentioned before, but this is the first time we really see her face to face)

It's going great so far. :3 I can't wait to read more!
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I'm glad you are enjoying it.

I've been waiting to show her sister for a while now. Originally her part was going to be short, but I decided to show more about her because she does have a role later on.

I should have more up soon enough. Hopefully today depending on how long the landlord takes when he comes over.

Well jaa ne

Kat
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yokomolotov Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Professional Artist
nice update. the sister is pretty.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks, glad you like her. She was the last of my character designs and I have no idea why I drew her that way, but glad people like the look of her.

Kat
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Indigo-Ashes Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009
Ooh, what shall she ask...

I like Melody, I have decided. Is she part Western? Or did her parents just like the name?
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Her parents wanted Melody to be the musical type, but Hitomi turned out to be the musical one and Melody more of an artist and activist. So things did not go the way they planed. LOL

Kat
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Indigo-Ashes Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
A rose by any other name, right?
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:iconthe-yuri-canon:
The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I guess you could put it that way.

Kat
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shanejayell Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Hobbyist Writer
Heh, looking good.

I had no problem with the japanese, but I'm a geek. *lol*
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks.

Yeah, but it would seem a lot of people on DA have a huge issue with Manga, never mind with people who actually know Japanese and use it. *sighs*

Kat
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agent-ayu Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Professional
Counlellor? Don't you mean Counselor?
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
opps.. I meant to have only two Ls... I think... yep... one too many Ls. I'll fix that in the morning.

Thanks.

Kat
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