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Inside Out Page 17 by The-Yuri-Canon Inside Out Page 17 by The-Yuri-Canon
Visit the inside out Gallery for more art: [link]

Page 01: [link]
page 16: [link]
Page 18: [link]

Note: Because so many people complain about the usage of Japanese in manga I've translated Hitomi and Melody's dialogue so they now say simply Big sis, little sis or just sis. For those interested Hitomi usually says Nee-chan and Melody, Imoto-chan. For all intent and purpose Sis should do just fine.

On the art side I'm amazed, I managed to finish scanning in and set up the text for the next 10 pages as well as finish inking and scanning this page all in one day. This has been a rather productive day it would seem. Hopefully this is good news for the rest of the month. All I need to do now is ink and tone the last nine pages and colour the cover page of the beginning to chapter 3.

I hope people enjoy this part of the story. Originally I was going to cut it down, but I found this explains a lot about things later in the story so left it the way it is. I hope it is too everyone's liking.

Well nighter.

The Characters and story of Inside OUt is copyright of Kathryn K Williams, Please do not copy in any way.

If you find any errors or typos please tell me so I can fix them quickly. I have no Betas on this project so please forgive me.

Kat
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SweetHellish Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
This might be a really dumb comment but upon seeing her big sister... That is one fine sister. : P
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I thought for sure I answered this one... maybe I dreamed I did... Anyways, a lot of people like Melody. More so after I posted her profile page
Inside OuT: Melody Profile by The-Yuri-Canon
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SweetHellish Featured By Owner Jan 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
You did answer it, right? I'm sure you did but can't find your response
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 23, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
DA had a hiccup I guess... *shrugs* Well enjoy the rest of Inside OuT. Time to try to get more pages done.
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Shadow-Gaijin Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010
yyy pppl complain about usin jap dialogue ._.!! that wat makes a manga, a mang D:<
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
People generally like to hear themselves talk and think they know everything so complain about the silliest of things. I could make a book out of the list of strange complaints I've heard in the past while.

Kat
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DeMoN8EyE Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
:iconohseriousplz: come-o0o0o0on spell-it-out
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Jan 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
She will.

Kat
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Deglorath Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009
Melody looks like someone you'd want to open up to, must make her a good counselor. I personally don't have any problem with however people want to write out their stories, I've seen some that even jump back and forth pretty wildly; but I think it should be up to you, eh? Anyways, good page.
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The-Yuri-Canon Featured By Owner Mar 25, 2009  Hobbyist Digital Artist
That is what I was trying for with her looks and had to draw her several times before getting it right. She needed to look understanding and yet cool at the same time. I toyed with several looks for her and finally settled with this one.

I don't plan to really jump around. More like take on different perspectives every now and then so people know what is going on outside of Hitomi's life instead of being completely in the dark all the time. I figured out how to go about this for the next chapter and I think it really works well for this story and allows me to give more insight into Hitomi's friends as well as other things that are going on.

Well, I'm glad you are enjoying the story. I'll have more up soon enough. I can't wait to get to show off her new looks.

Kat
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